Society is saturated beyond a capacity to absorb Another drop of Jesus— Heard the message preached at them over and over Until inoculation was complete. Culture repels the efforts of a half-hearted church… A church convinced of its own worthiness Painted white panels against a background Colored by the unrighteousness of the common populace While […]
Month: October 2007
feedback on the feedback :)
I did get one response. My friend suggested people don’t want to comment on the quality of my poetry. While I can appreciate that, I would be interested in hearing if what I write strikes a chord with you. Does it make you feel something? Good? Bad? Happy? Angry? Are the things I go through […]
Feedback
One of the most valuable things you can give to an artist is feedback. When a child brings you his drawing, he doesn’t want you to simply accept the gift and continue on as if nothing happened. He expects you to praise him and shower him with accolades, not because the drawing was the most […]