I did get one response. My friend suggested people don’t want to comment on the quality of my poetry. While I can appreciate that, I would be interested in hearing if what I write strikes a chord with you.
Does it make you feel something? Good? Bad? Happy? Angry? Are the things I go through relevant to anyone else’s experience out there? (Am I the only one struggling to find balance???) Does what I write touch your heart? Are you inspired to take some quiet moments and hang out with Creator? Or maybe for once in your life to let down the wall and be honest with yourself and Him about how you feel (even if it’s mad!)?
I’m not trying to prove that I can write better than the next fellow. I am simply trying to put my heart out there in hopes that it touches someone else’s heart. I keep hoping that somehow, some way, I can make a difference in someone’s life by being transparent enough to let His light and love shine through all my junk.
So, nuff said I guess. I’ll go on and trust that God’s in charge of all this stuff… like I really did know that all along, but I had this terribly childish urge to rant and rave and throw a tantrum about my crud. Hope y’all will forgive me. I’ll put some more poetry out here next time I have a bit of inspiration.
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